And it seems that even Lorali won't be safe. Someone is trying to take the throne from the current king and doesn't hesitate to use unorthodox methods to succeed. Her safe life on land won't last much longer though, as things in The Whirl seem to be getting out of hand. It's been two years since Rory drowned and Lorali has been living the live of a normal (human) teenage girl ever since. Such a shame, because I was really looking forward to it! Things did improve slightly towards the ending and the general plot is interesting enough, but all in all I had a really hard time reading Aurabel. Furthermore, I had a hard time connecting the different chapters and characters especially in the beginning they seemed random and didn't make a lot of sense.

Some characters were also starting to get on my nerves.

As for the characters: I like how their different personalities are refleccted in their respective dialogues and prose, but I do have to see they felt a bit forced and unnatural. I literally shuddered the whole time every time the dreaded comments made their appearance. it was really hard to decipher the meaning of their comments and 2. I get that this is supposed to portray 'superficial' teenage fans talking, but 1. Another thing that bothered me is the horrible spelling in the forum interactions bit. It sounds harsh, but somehow not telling the truth doesn't feel right either. Things only got better towards the ending, but I have to be honest and say I probably wouldn't have reached that point if this wouldn't have been an ARC. Things just didn't make sense as all and I had a hard time even getting past the first few pages and chapters. A lot of background AND essential information is missing if you don't read Lorali, and I felt a bit cheated on I didn't know that beforehand. This lack of information might have been part of the reason I basically felt like I was reading a story written in a foreign language I could only barely understand. First of all I want to make clear that this book should have been classified as a sequel, because after some investigation I found out most of the worldbuilding is taken from a previous publication ( Lorali) and it's almost impossible to fully understand Aurabel with out it. Aurabel sounded like an fun fantasy read with the mermaids as a bonus, but unfortunately this book turned out to be a quite unpleasant experience. Mermaids are without doubt underrated creatures and there just aren't all that many stories about them out there. I admit Aurabel was a coverlove-request, but I was also looking forward to read another mermaid story. *** A copy of this book was kindly provided to me by Netgalley and Hotkey Books in exchange for an honest review. 'Even when two paths spindle off, it doesn't mean they aren't going to meet up, once again, somewhere along the way towards the end.'

Lorali by laura dockrill